All Comments on 'The Twelve Vitali Ch. 07'

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Akasha70Akasha70over 6 years ago
Wow

What a nice treat coming back from a boring session at uni

Answered a few questions to

DJ54701DJ54701over 6 years ago
Can't hardly wait.

I can't hardly wait for each chapter. I enjoyed your earlier stories so much (The Twelve Tables and the Bella series.) You are very talented and I hope you keep writing for a very long time. Not only are the plots sound, you paint a picture with your words. It is a pleasure to read a story with good structure, grammer and no typo's. :-)

teedeedubteedeedubover 6 years ago
Wasn't sure

where this one was going. Great chapter. Can't wait for 8. thanks for sharing.

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 6 years ago
Thirteen tables?

What surprise is in store for us?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Judgment not judgement

Sorry for being an ass but it's something I kept noticing. Anyway love where this story is going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
grrr

It is so disappointing to see another girl groomed by abuse for rough sex :(. Why xan't we have Ellie's talented writing with some more realistic women and men?..

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 5 years ago
Dear grrr,

Please do us all a favor & either stop reading these stories or stop commenting on them. You are an annoying wet blanket, repeating the same bogus complaint over & over & over . . .

Believe it or not, there are many of us who aren't content with plain vanilla and would love to share brothers. Admittedly, I find spanking a major mood-killing turn off, so I merely let my eyes slide over that part; what I DON'T do is whine about it, demanding the author write to my personal kinks. I'm just so grateful ellie provides us such hot stories absolutely FREE. So try to show her a little appreciation for a change.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Protest.

Me thinks the lady doth protest too much. She is still reading after 30 or so chapters.

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