All Comments on 'The Twelve Vitali Ch. 11'

Damn it. My stupid iPhone made me hit 4 stars and I meant 5 and I can't change it. Is it possible to change it?

You rock! This story just keeps getting better. Thank you!

I can’t wait to see what her first time is like! I love the story and how it is progressing. Great writing....keep up the good work.

Cat sounds so brave and honest about what (she thinks?) she wants. Her trust in Matteo and his trust in her are admirable. I hope they both find what they need.

Again, your story is absolutely enthralling. Love it. And just when I had expected the tale to come to an end, your fire off chapters in amazing succession.

I have so much to do tomorrow, er, today, and I cannot put my tablet away and stop reading! I love your writing, your creativity with the story is compelling,and I have fallen in love with these characters.

I wish she were less into that stuff, but mostly I wish there was at least one normal man in these fucked up tables who would not push women, e.g. did he really need to make her go into public braless??? And I really do not appreciate it that he is not giving her the possibility to explore and retreat and instead makes ultimatums that he would not give it up once the floodgates open, that is blackmail. I hate these men from these tables so deeply, it is a testament to how good of a writer Ellie is!