All Comments on 'The Twelve Vitali Ch. 13'

She gave two months notice and Vanessa is still upset with her?! What a petulant bitch. Thanks for another wonderful chapter! I'm glad that Matteo values Cat enough to say fuck no to being the Oracle.

Gypsytramp, a petulant bitch to bedevil the heroine is a hallmark character of Ellie's stories. ;)

Cat is sterner stuff than some other super sparkly submissives in Ellie stories. What will she be willing to endure within a trail? Will she call bullshit on anything asked of her? Personal strength is every bit as valuable as submission. Will those running her trial be made aware of Matty's thoughts about sharing her? How would that impact her trial?

It's rather sucky to be contemplating the end of your relationship as you contemplate the start of it.

Still squicked out that you made Peri blow her FIL. Ewww :D :D :D

I am enjoying the story. But I can't for the life of me figure out how having two brothers share a wife makes anything better. Never mind how it could become a requirement. Has this been explained anywhere? How did it start?

Thanks for sharing so many chapters this week. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

You have spoiled us all this week. These have been wonderful. I look forward to the continuing saga.

Thank you for another posting! What a treat!!

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! You have made my holidays so great so far!!!! Ur the best!

Thank you for another amazing chapter.I'm fascinated by your characters and really want to know what will happen next.Although, I have a minor question:in first chapter you state that Matteo's age is 28 and 10 years older than his younger siblings.Here you make him look like almost 40 and 20 years older than his brothers.Which is correct?

Story is going well, good writing. Merry Christmas!

I have devoured this after absolutely loving the original Twelve Tables story. Please keep the chapters coming!

I just love your writing. The first book 12 tables was amazing and I was sceptical when the new offer started because I had been so engrossed in the other characters but this is just as good and I really hope to see a book for each family of the tables. And you really should consider publishing, your a great author.

I am getting sadder and sadder as I see Cat becoming more and more of a cookie-cutter sub who likes pain, I was really disappointed in her rejoicing in tenderness and soreness that was leftover from all the beating she received :(. Why can't there be dominance without pain??? Why does he get off on making her choke, tear up, on beating her to the point of bruising, etc.? I can never understand the appeal of hurting someone you love. If that is the best way a dominant person feels loved, then I am sorry for them. I also cannot accept the idea of punishing, especially for things like mentioned in the previous chapter, e.g. for Cat demanding space and time - she has full rights to that and such things are not a subject of punishment, that is absurd, punishment has no place in a truly equal partnership unless it goes both ways, and yet he also wants to punish her for topping from the bottom. All these restrictions just sound exhausting instead of sexy. I guess I am grateful to Ellie for helping me reflect on this fad :) and making me understand more and more deeply that I would not like to be in a BDSM relationship, as I find it fundamentally demeaning and physically abusive despite all the trappings that people who defend it like to embelish it with.

firstly, I LOVE ur stories!! but i am confused. I've read the twelve tables, and in reading this I'm confused as to why there is now mention of thirteen tables and not twelve. Everytime I see mention of twelve is annoys me cause there has been no explanation as to why it has gone for 12 to 13, especially being that in the first series is states that the 12 goes back to the beginning. I'm not judging or criticizing, I'm just looking for clarification please so this one element is not tainting my experience of your writing. Thank you for your stories

The thirteenth Table is when all of the Chairs of the current tables come together. So you felt confused by this.

Re grrrr

I really wish lit would block ppl like this.

BDSM. Bondage Disipline. Dominance Submission. Sadism Masochist.

It really covers everything you can think of or imagine. And does NOT have to involve pain.