All Comments on 'The Twelve Vitali Ch. 20'

Let's hope literotica publish next weeks instalment on Tuesday. I can't wait for Matteo's return. Cat becomes more impressive with ever chapter. Keep up the excellent writing.

I'm curious if all the Vitali women go to the same finishing school for bitches? What is with these women? It's always interesting to me how people who are wealthy because of their parents or spouse and not because of their own doings become so entitled. Being so judgmental when you've done nothing for yourself and have been spoiled and catered to isn't impressive, it's obnoxious. So far, there aren't a lot of personality traits to recommend the Vitali women. I'm sure you have some redemptive moments in store for us though.

Once again, I'm starting to like Ricco more and more after his earlier idiocy. In this chapter, he reminded me a bit of Stephen from the Bella series. Stephen is one of my favorites of your characters so it was fun and now I need to go revisit a couple chapters of Bella to get Stephen out of my system again. Another great chapter, Ellie.

You keep building up these great characters in a glorious read. Keep them coming.

Another amazing chapter that has me wishing for more! I love the development in both of these characters and can't wait for what's next!

What will happen with these women who want to steam roll her when she becomes the Little Mama? Also, when will Teresa start treating Cat like an Autonomous being? All of the Vitalis are so used to everyone around them jumping on command that someone from “outside” who needs to be in charge as well is going to throw them for a loop.

I like Mia. She got the other girls together to try to help Cat, and she backed off quickly once she realized that she had overstepped. I can’t wait to see Cat stand up for herself and put Aria, Vanessa, and Maryanne in their places. Trista is growing, but she still seems like a whiny brat to me.

All I'm going to say is hurry up "terrific Tuesdays or fantastic Fridays" I need more

Love ya Ellie

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This chapter has so much speed, it leaves me in a rollercoaster of emotions. The struggle to be heard and noticed as a person. And then the surrender in a completely different setting. Both as dashing.

Your characters are complex and well developed.

getting turned on by a woman's suffering is so deeply mysogynous that I am liking these guys less and less. I definitely prefer what was referred to as hard, rough, hut ultimately vanilla sex...

If BDSM isn't your thing then don't read the genre! (See top of each page) At, basically, chapter 50, if same grouchy immature anonymous through out, put it down and go to romance if you're only interested in vanilla sex. Your whole extreme feminist attitude against men dominate/female submission ... There are hundreds of BDSM stories where the dominatrix is female/male submission. Though Hellena-there's lesbian BDSM as well.

Either way, as in alternative life styles you have chosen to keep reading Ellie's 'Twelve Tables', and don't seem to comment how excellent a chapter is when you don't have something masogynistic to complain about! Since you have consented to be influenced by the story line, at this point your basically complaining for being a closet masochist, or think a touch on the shoulder allows to say #MeToo.

What ever. The scene between Cat and Ricco...oh yes please more!

Ellie, you always remember the after care! Can't wait for the polymory ménage 'twas ! YUM!