All Comments on 'The Twilight Dragon Ch. 04'

This is a lovely story, thank you very much.

I love how you created the two women so differently and how the older woman would have more knowledge, keeping up an easy conversation with the dragon, while the girl is not offended by this, but fades into her own little world (love that bit of realism - it just got me goo-i).. I hope we get to see more of Donya and not in a bad way where she rats them out. I like her. Thanks again for beautiful story. Loved the last paragraph!