All Comments on 'The Two Companions Pt. 04'

Nice work within the "Firefly" universe. The characters and dialog were good. But please, please, have someone check your work for spelling and grammar befor you post. And do NOT refer to Kaylee's "shapely curves" - Jewel Staite is real pretty but she has as few curves as Summer Glau.

Having spent some time examining Jewel on her site and in publicity shots of cast and crew, I find that she fills out a tube top or a light summer dress very well with well formed breasts, small waist and good looking legs. Comparing her to Summer's ex-ballerina body would do both a disservice.

I apologize for any mistakes that Word 2003 and I missed. I intensionally misspelled Jayne's name to link him to the Jane religion. The Dialog for Kaylee was intended to be in character with her rural dialect. In addition, somehow her comments on Jorge's manhood got mangled and should read

"Wow, Simon you're well hung and all,

but I ain't seen nothing like this since I was a teenager and I sexed

the over-endowed neighbor boy and got a wuppin' from my Pa cuz the boy was under age. I thought he was at least 18."