All Comments on 'The Ugly Shop'

Normally i would hate the 'it was all a dream' twist, but it works in this case. Keep up the good work, let your imagination delve further into depravity.

That was intense there at the end. Was getting ready to dislike you, but the end did resolve the extreme conclusion without too much calamity for the main character. Well written and well thought out, although a bit intense.

Loved it. That is all I can say.

I loved the way the decision to change how Monica looked was taken away from her. Total submission and humiliation.

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Clear characters, resonant dialogue, great portrayal of a certain sort of sub-kink of this kind of story -- a choice, but yet a sealed fate..

Excellent bbw description, and the medical stuff is killer.

And who hasn't wakened from a dream with profound relief?