All Comments on 'The Ultimate Seduction Pt. 01'

You obviously have no idea what incest is as this is NOT incest. Incest is between closely related blood relatives such as father daughter, mother son, brother sister etc. A legal relation does not create incest!

"1. sexual intercourse between two persons commonly regarded as too closely related to marry"

This one is really amazing. A sexual relationship between people related by affinity (law) is also considered to be an Incest.

Wikipedia says so.. ;)

Go back to eight grade, and try to pay attention in English class this time.

One comment asked you to go back to the eighth grade, he was being much too kind. Going back to the second or third grade would have been much more acceptable to me as a reader. There wasn't one sentence in this story without an era in spelling, tense, or cohesiveness. If this wasn't the worst story I have ever read, it was certainly trying to be.

Is era a new way to spell error? People in glass houses etc.

I have no idea where you learnt the English language but I suspect that it may have been in the USA.

Your first sentence is not one, but two. It should read..' One comment asked you to go back to the eighth grade. He was being much too kind'. (I don't know how a comment can ask anything. Perhaps a commenter can though.) Your last sentence had no need for a comma after the word 'tense'. I have no idea how 'era' crept into that sentence but I suspect you meant 'error'. You are not a credit to your education system. I thought iamthediva wrote fairly well, albeit with a few silly spelling errors.

This story was certainly better than most in that regard.