All Comments on 'The Unexpected'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good except..

lots of typos. Several times you had words that should have been one word.

smoothboismoothboiover 16 years ago
very cool concept.

You should continue this series! There's a lot to explore: who comes to the island, how a place like this came to be. I'm really into 'forced' gay stories too, so this was great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Hard to read with the errors. Find an editor.

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