All Comments on 'The Unexpected Storm'

You describe Jenny as taller than average with breasts large enough to need to wear a sports bra while running and with a runners body. But in the sex scenes you call her small and tiny. I think her initial description makes her a good physical match for Richard. Having a sex scene between equal partners is more exciting to me and less of a cliche.

Loved this story a good one to get you wet right off the bat. Thanks

AS A WIDOWER 10 YEARS I CAN CERTAINLY RELATE TO RICHARD'S PLEASURE

I KNOW THAT I WOULD ENJOY WHAT I WAS PRESENTED WITH. SO WHAT IF THE PHYSICAL

DESCRIPTIONS ARE NOT CONSISTENT. THE LUST IS VERY CONSISTENT.

THANK YOU FOR THE STORY