All Comments on 'The Unveiling Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Provocative!

Very well written, and even better the imagination behind it. I'm betting you're a woman. We guys just don't feel things that deeply. Five stars, hope for more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very good

Can't wait for more.

FindmywayFindmywayabout 8 years ago
Hmmm...

Next chapter please

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