All Comments on 'The Urge'

by Tson

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good story

I liked this story a lot ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Excellent

Highly original and certainly one of the better first person narrative I've come across. Also appreciate that you didn't end it with her waking from a dream! Well done.

ChrisTor22ChrisTor22almost 9 years ago
Refreshing!!

Very enjoyable....love when the 1st person challenges herself, gives in and bares!! Is the Prof blind or will he/she keep her up on the desk the whole double period (including the break) so that he/she and all her friends and classmates can not just see her but come close and visually examine her.... perhaps the Prof will tell her to keep changing positions so as to display her no-longer secret parts even more licentiously and exhibit her total arousal?? Where else will the URGE strike our exhilarating exhibitionist?? SO many possibilities!!

bottovarnisbottovarnisalmost 3 years ago

Great! Really enjoyed the first person narrative and the pacing. The small doubts she expressed added to the realistic feel as did her passion in overcoming them. Nice work!

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