All Comments on 'The Vacation House Ch. 08'

For those of you who have kindly followed and read this series, I wish to thank you all. The ongoing relationship between myself and my Dad will continue as long as there is interest in it. I wish everyone a wonderful summer and enjoyment as well as fulfilled fantasies. Sincerely, 1puck1

This is one of my fave stories on this site. But you need to post more frequently! I'm sick of waiting a month in between each installment!! I need more NOW!

u're a great writer but damn this needs to move faster!

and Lee as well

When r we going to get to the real stuff, this was just a tease. Part three and so on PLEASE.

patiently awaiting next installment

I can hardly believe how this story has built and how you have made is seem so real. Is it real?

I love how your taking your time with this. I already blew a load to it its so hot. Have you ever written these before? It is the best erotica I have ever read, very realistic and detailed. I am looking forward to the next chapter, and anything you write after that!

PS it is:

i don't want to waste water

not

i don't want to waist water

claws yes, but tentacles, not so much. lol other than that, it's been a great read. thanks.

not sure what your nationality is or your knowledge of the US english language, but i wonder why you seem to always omit the letter "E" from the word "breath(e)" also, why you use the word "cloth" when it should be "clothes." there might be others, but i've been using an accessibility reader so i'm not actually viewing the screen at all times. anyway, just wondering

Please let’s get to the really good stuff, eg. sex

Just curious, this seems different than how the other volumes are written.