All Comments on 'The Valentine'

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CindychemiseCindychemiseabout 9 years ago
Mmmmmm

:-)

Love it. Cindy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
There are good things here, but...

It frightens me that someone might read this story--well written as it is--and decide to try and play this sort of game without knowing the rules of safety. The Top kept leaving the bottom alone, in restraints, for long periods of time. He actually went away, with no one observing the status of the bottom. You can make the bottom believe he or she has been left alone, but it's not safe to actually leave them unattended. Accidents and unintended consequences can happen at any time. Safety is the first consideration!

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