All Comments on 'The Valentine's Affair'

So damn erotic. Mmm wish i were there too.

More Andrea-Jill adventures? Pretty intense.

This needs a prequel.

I agree with 'this needs a prequel' because I think the weakest part of the piece is the lack of story which has brought Andrea and Jill to this point. The presentation of that part is rather awkward in its tenses.

But this gets big marks from me for a) being really detailed, and b) presenting the sex in such a positive, life-affirming light. Great stuff.