All Comments on 'The Valentine's Day gift'

This was fairly well-done, but I'm not quite sure what I thought of it. I do like that Amber is done with Mark, and not pining for him. Victor and Amber are good characters, even if the situation is a little exaggerated -- and hey, why not, that's the fun of writing, right? :) I'd be interested in even a short follow-up, with a Mark-Amber confrontation.. but I'll just have to do that in my head, I guess.

Love your style of writing. Hope to read more of your works. Keep posting !!!

I guess mark knew enough to get rid of her before she took hi m down to her level screwing strangers.

You can always tell a teenager. The story is always so immature.

the Ct. Yankee

well told. you set-up the action nicely with the flashback and description of how she was going to spend the evening drowning her sorrows in ice cream. the story had a good pace and the dialogue between the characters came across as true to life. Victor was pure fantasy but that is what the story is all about, isn't it?