All Comments on 'The Valentine's Day Surprise'

Will should be sucking his mom's toes while Alex fucks her humiliating him

I always like cuckson's stories. I enjoyed this one too. I loved the tattoo and piercing idea.

I think that the average rating is only 2.9 because - the story is too fast paced to be in tune with reality ; the son is way too meek and accepting of his predicament ; certain facinating details have been skipped(like how she goes to the tattoo shop to get the tattoo or how she goes shopping with the bully), denying the reader a visual treat ; the mother's decision seems out of place and too fast.

However I like reading all your new stories. I was wondering if you could make the bully coax the mother to go for a massage, get a trendy haircut, get her pussy styled by the son's barber - the son should be shocked.

Hope to read more new stories and more chapters from conflicted.

Good luck . Keep the chapters rolling.

That was SO nasty and deliciously tempting to read!It would be great if you turned Leslie into an extreme slut like Elaine but with a brand new bullying,sadictic attitude and dark nature.Keep....ROCKING my friend!!!!!!!

That was a good story but you were more wonderful at Conflicted. You have the talent of writing nasty erotic series with great minute details. You develop the story slowly but you draw our interest throughout relentlessly. You could do a thousands of things to conflicted and make more sequels.

Your fans are waiting

Great story,

You are an amazing writer, keep up the great work.

Hearing of hot moms betraying their families willingly is hot as Fuck.

Love the details

Keep going!

my favorite part was when she started taking selfies whilst having sex. it's very sexy when a mom throws away her duties to her family to act like a slutty teenager.

Should have hired a bigger guy and fuck Alex up

please write a story about the son getting revenge on his mom and bully .

I love those stories where the mother betrays his son. The mother surrenders to evil and loves the son's suffering.

Perversion and lust.

His life is over anyway. Take Alex and his mom with him.

wimpy cuck shit.

Good story but too fast paced

Love your style!

Keep these short stories comming!

and whats up and coming up. TK U MLJ LV NV

God I loved putting myself in Alex's role, your stories are just amazing

Worst story ever!!!!!!

Maybe have the next chapter be where he catches the bully kid and vivisects him in front of the mother while she cries and screams for him to stop? Have him take Alex's head after removing it and force her to make out with it or something twisted like that. That would make a great ending :)

Needs a sequel

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Still waiting for you to write a story worth reading!