All Comments on 'The Vassal Academy Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
About 3 1/2 pages too

LONG

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I am glad you are back

Your stories are always well written and well edited plus they are quite entertaining.

ann_8280ann_8280about 16 years ago
wow i loved it

i hope that you continue to keep this story going... i love it alot. looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
that person is wrong

I'm a writer and usually the writing on these stories is so crappy I just skip ahead to be able to masturbate. I couldn't help but read everything and love these. Please continue. Thanks so much I've really enjoyed them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Amazing!

Your writing is REALLY great and everything from the style, the plot, the characters, is just PERFECT! Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Fantastic

Your writing is so excellent, and realistic. You can really get into the story and the characters. I can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Okay, I'm hooked.

Fun story so far. It's nice to enjoy a story and see there are still many chapters ahead. Thanks for writing it for us to enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More Detail.

I would love more detail on the training. I wish there was an a place like this that I Master and I could attend. We have been together for so long and need some way to set up a workable training routine. Getting ideas where ever possible.

Thank You

NEthingGozeNEthingGozeabout 2 months ago

Very nice second act.

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