All Comments on 'The Vassal Academy Ch. 11'

of it there is?

Yes there are a few minor errors in the grammar and syntax

in this chapter BUT the soul of this series is in the content and progress of its characters. If there was time taken for precise editing then we -the eager readers- would

have to wait much longer before enjoying this chapter and

even more time anticipating Ch. 12. The previous reader

must have a "cathy complex"! Honesty looking forward to the

further chapters and other stories you will write.

The story is what is important and it is great, what is not so important is a few typos!!

Outstanding