by CharleneBarr
Fuck it that was so adorable! I did something a kin to that with my wife so long ago. Drive in we were going to rained out, so I made one outta the bed room. But my god the ending was so adorable! Great work mate!
~Assume
i really liked this story it was very nice and romantic i hope you add more soon
More of a love story than mom/son incest.
Well done, and thanks for the read
Another winner from Charlene. The thing I like the most about your stories is the playful banter between the mom and the son. I guess that banter is only natural when the two are best friends and they clearly care for and love each other deeply. Taking the step towards becoming 'lovers' from just mom-son is only natural progression I suppose.
Romantically written, digdaddy is right that it's a love story. I admit, the bit before the ending left me a bit misty eyed. But good to read that Debs has a new man in her life - and she won't ever need another.
Thanks for writing. 5 stars again.
Added a poignant touch after the romantic sex. Great five pointer
I did enjoy the story, but found that many sentences seemed to run on. Don't get me wrong, it was good, though at times it felt a bit much.
Thanks for the read, and I look forward to your future stories.
It's the words that make it special. And what sexy, romantic, endearing words they are.
"It wasn't that. At least I don't think it was that. Oh no, I hoped it wasn't that. Was it that?"
It was!
I had to share this story with my brother-in-law. In his youth, he recorded almost 5,000 movies onto VCR tapes. He had tapes of everything imaginable from a marathon of John Wayne movies to a selection of Emmanuel movies. And he and I both enjoy reading erotic fiction. We sometimes even re-enact our favourite parts. You get 5 stars. We get this story on our Favourites list..
I've read all of your stories and really enjoyed them. I can't, for the life of me, understand why your scores are so low. You writing is brilliant, the dialogue realistic and quite funny. I guess there's no accounting for taste!
Not what I was expecting, that's not a critism. I was expecting the story to say he found the old VHS tapes and found some old home made porn that starred his mother, maybe an incest homemade movie.
I enjoyed how this story played out, it's well written,
Thank you for a sexy, moving story. Romantic and hot, really nice.
Well done. Another well written, loving and sexy read. Let's have more please.
They keep getting better. I'm heading for the next in the ascending order! I feel I'll be very disappointed when the latest story has been read and there are no more. Please keep writing!
This author has an unique ability to include humor at the most unlikely points yet achieve an outlandishly comical perspective of the events unfolding.
A great story. I’m so pleased I found your entries.
A good author, excellent & totally different plots, characters blend well together, erotic. Would love some of them to have been longer but certainly looking forward to any more that may be forthcoming. John, Grimsby UK