All Comments on 'The Video Ch. 04'

Both the story equally awesome

"Ah shit, here it comes! Hohhhhh...".

After reading this I was a little disappointed until I want back to FHT and read the part after the one on one and found that Ethan & Gabe went to bed drunk. SO, this part of the story fits perfectly into FHT, so very HOT! THANKS! :)

It's fascinating, knowing what's coming next and still being able to be surprised by the way you bring it to life. Great fun!

Well damn, lol. Just loving this!

great job... but i'm kinda upset you stopped where you did. lol guess i'm waiting for the next chapter... i'm an impatient soul.

This is good but I didn't line you changing the story. Brandt didnt see Donnelly when he first got home after the uplink. He came into his apt and was caught off guard by Donnelly. You make it seem like he just walked in and started kissing. You lost the tension if not knowing how brandt was going to remspond to Donnelly after the video sex. :(

It's a good thing I already know that this angsty ending here has another one in the original story.

Red hot!

You two write well together and AkshunLove did a great job of filling in the blanks. Loved both stories!!

It seems like such a sad way to end the chapter, especially because xaviermayne's story ends happily.

I love reading this story from Gabe`s POV. Please finish the story. Where is the promised `even longer` epilogue?

Nice seeing how things were from Gabriel's point of view. Would have been better if you had wrote out the entire scene at the house when Brandt first got back and confronted Gabriel before the kiss, but it was great overall.

I see you havnt posted in a while, do you plan on writing more from Gabriel's POV?

please finish this you can't let it end like this....

Thankfully, the main story has a HEA.

There should be MORE

Come on! You can't stop it here! I need more!

And now I need to go back and read their books again. Love these too so much. Experiencing it from Gabe's perspective is awesome!