All Comments on 'The View from On Top'

That was so hot! Nice fuck that got me going. Good job!

He had his entire fist in her pussy but when he fucked her she was so tight?

I don't think so

You obviously have a filthy mind which is an incredible turn on. More please !

This is so fucking filthy. I love it!!! God I wish a man would fuck me like that. Great job!!!!

One of the finest stories i have read . it looked like i was being fucked .i just came all over myself.

Amazingly puerile trite! Jam-packed so FULL of contradictions that it makes absolutely no sense at all.

Her FIRST time out and she's not only hymen-free, but must have habitually masturbated vigorously and frequently, with Jeroboams, tree-trunks, garbage-bins and the odd dead-dog or life-sized stuffed panda-bear stuffed-toy, the way she so readily accepted a grown-man's index finger without a moments hesitation, immediately followed by a second, THIRD, FORTH, and then his entire FIST, whoosh, straight into Captain James T. Kirk territory, -where NO Man's been before? And, she eagerly takes it all in? Without a moments hesitation, flinch, or demur? Come on, get real! GROW up! Then to show all the maturity of a four-year-old, "she" persistently prattles on every six-seconds with "how incredibly tight" she is?? Duh, I think not Doofus! I have had post-partum wives that found fist-fucking too much, let alone a pristine Virgin! and more than one mother of four that found it too damned unbearably painful! Yet this first-time-fucker laps it up? Yeah, yeah, says a day-dreaming innocent-abroad!

Then we have this gem- "With a smile, I pulled down his boxers and could do nothing more than stare as his huge, at least 7 inches cock greeted me.

"Like what you see?" he asked from above me and I looked up, licking my lips as I nodded.

"You're so big," I whispered, my voice hoarse with desire and from screaming".

Well I'm sorry, but a cunt "that is big enough to drive a Coach-and-Horses through" can never "be tight enough to crack nuts with", and never in a month-of-Sundays could it ever be thoroughly sated with paltry little 7" fun-size boy-cock!

This whole repetitive saga smacks of an innocent, immature Author firmly entrenched into the "Pooh/Bum/Willy" phase of 4-8 year olds, who think that constantly repeating such words endlessly is fun, forbidden, rude & adult. They usually grow out of it soon after, as they begin to get glimpses & hints into the far broader, more complex & colourful world of the teenage years of apprenticeship to adulthood, leaving this rather anally-obsessed and crass world of infantile bed-wetting pissing contests to the children, and those unfortunates who will never quite outgrow their precocious egos!