All Comments on 'The Village Fete Ch. 01'

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mazzme almost 9 years ago

Bravo!

A deliciously creative story that has me wanting to go to that place if it existed. Stupendous writing with a sensational build up and erotic sex scenes!

DevonCowboy almost 4 years ago

Fantastic fantasy

I'd make a lot of use of John's phallus - cock doesn't seem quite adequate to describe it

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As I pass the youthful (cough, cough!) age of 75 most of my life is now memories and it's delightful to sit at the keyboard and create stories. Stories of my past experiences as well as stories of fun, frantic frolics and of wishful thinking too! Not long ago I went through ...

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