All Comments on 'The Vineyard'

The last couple of sentences left me wanting a richer ending to go with the otherwise richly written story.

Seems out of place

but seemed wrong for a one off. This seemed more like a first chapter than a complete story. There is definitely more to this story and I would like to see their relationship evolve.

What a great story! Beautifully written and sexy as hell.

Thank you to all who have both been positive and constructive in the criticism. I do seem to have some struggles with the closings. I would welcome any further guidance from more experienced writers. I am a newcomer so I would be gratefful for any guidance in this industry.