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rightbankalmost 9 years agowhat happens after she recognizes him?
What has happened over the past five years?
What happens next?
The signs of a very good story are shown by the curiosity of the readers wanting more.
Comentarista82almost 9 years agoLove it
I love how you build Keith's backstory and how he gets involved with Kendra. She's REALLY smart and they make a good couple--and she's strong, something that Keith needed after being so abused. I loved the ending photo session and her putting the breaks on things. I'm looking forward to Ch. 2! :)
KittyOh48over 8 years agoLoved the title and your reference to it!
This story seems very interesting, I like the backstory and how they came to be. But where have they been these lat seven years they were apart? Is that how he ended up affiliated to a gang or mafia? I can't wait to read the entire story.
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