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Click hereBut now, he worried. With a curse, he slopped down the cut glass tumbler and searched his iPhone for the number to Millville PD.
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Cody leaned on the car horn. The fat fuck was taking too long in the gas station bathroom. Finally, Bam emerged.
"The point of leaving after dark isn't to get there tomorrow morning, ya idiot," Cody snapped. He was nervous. He'd never put in work before; his power within the organization came from family connections. Bam shrugged.
"I had to use it," he explained.
They were right outside of Boston and Cody, a creature of habit, insisted they stop at an old-fashioned '50s-style place he frequented. He said it was his good luck charm. Bam liked it too, as he'd discovered a glory hole there once and took pains to advertise his singleness on every subsequent trip, though he'd never repeated the luck of that first visit. The men continued lightly arguing as they divvied up the snowballs, Nutter Butters and bear claws they'd purchased inside. They never even saw Keith approaching from the side alley. Two quick shots apiece from his near-silent weapon and it was done.
Can't wait until the next update. You should put this up on Wattpad. It's way more interactive and has a huge audience for interracial/BWWM stories. My story is up there right now and killing it. Yours would too! Here's my profile: https://www.wattpad.com/user/JayeandGreen
And I loved this!
So I read this series in one sitting. It's Amazing. I think that you have been keeping with the realism for the fact that she has her self doubts and he has his dark secrets. The benefit is that you have combined the two elements and made it their story. I hope that you continue writing this series.
These two deserve to be together! They need a happy ending. Love the update. Keep them coming!
Hollywood endings are all over the map these days, but I'd vote for an ending real to this story. Keith has the brains to succeed, whether it's taking out the bad guys or getting a real, legit job. You've drawn this mob scene small enough that he could take them out and so could an organized police action. You had Niall be a jerk for this installment, but he could end up partly saving the day. Keith and Kendra sure can't stay around their parents, as you've clearly closed the book on that. They can move on to Boston and have a real life.