All Comments on 'The Virgin, Madonna and Child'

by pheacock

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
outstanding

this is one of the best stories on this site, the love and compassion of one woman who changed the lives of a mother and daughter is by far the best thing I hope this story wins the winter contest

AlexPHensonAlexPHensonover 7 years ago
Cute but lacking in character

This was a very sweet story, but it lacked any real personality. It was like a fairy tale, with all the clichés, and a lesbian context. Not an enjoyable read

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
very sweet story

this story was different from most on this site but really of the festive moment. some times though I found it a little twee but what would Christmas be without a little twee.

the erotica was there at the end but maybe only leaving it to the last 10 % was a bit too short maybe 50 50 is better suited for this site

Jony663Jony663over 7 years ago
A Good Story

This is a good story with lots of romance and little sex, but a very enjoyable read. Keep it up.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago

What a wonderful love story!! I absolutely loved it. Please keep writing!!

LinneaLundinLinneaLundinalmost 7 years ago
Thank You

This is a very sweet and lovely story. I was on the verge of tears several times at the humanity Del gave to the mother and daughter. Simply wonderful.

podslypodslyover 6 years ago

This by far is the best Christmas story in literotica thank you I've read it 5 times now

vpettprovpettproalmost 6 years ago
Tears

I have read this story Soo many times and it still brings tears to my eyes. Thank you

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 5 years ago
Most appropriate for the season

Christmas stories seem to be the exception to one or both protagonists in lesbian romances being middle class/comfortable to filthy rich; both women here make church mice look fat & sassy. One of your best; keep on writing, please!

Slurpy29Slurpy29over 1 year ago

This is a wonderful story that I have read every Christmas Eve since it has been posted. Truly heartwarming tale perfectly capturing the meaning of the season. One of the best short stories posted on this site, by far the best holiday story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Black or White - Gay or Straight. Provide a woman with shelter, food, status and she'll gladly give it up.

Slurpy29Slurpy294 months ago

Merry Christmas Pheacock. My yearly tradition of reading this wonderful story on Christmas Eve continues. It is what this season is about. Thank you.

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