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All Comments on 'The Virgins'

by tommcgee

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Perhaps a bit Longer

A long session and a few more incidents would make it a better story.

Still very good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Should have continued it

What you wrote was very good. Taking it a bit further would have made it better. Or make this chapter 1 an keep going. Keep writing though.

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