All Comments on 'The Visit'

Perfectly written!

So well balanced! The bar scene was really good and I loved how funny (but not distracting from the sexiness) her honest confession was :)

Excellently written! I am sure more could be written about a continued relationship between these two.

This could be a one off. A nice fantasy for both genders if he/she relates to the characters. Being male, I related to Kevin--also married. But, as this story is close to home, I would love to see your take on the aftermath of the passion they share. What happens the next day? The next month? Year? Is this just a one night stand or is there more? Does Sara have any feelings for Kevin other than sexual? I'll ask the same about Kevin.

I won't know the answers unless you write a continuation. Thank you for what you have written so far. I certainly enjoyed it!

The construction of the story was everything a good short story should be. A gradual build up, nice description of both characters, the tension of the first meeting leaving your readers unsure of how Kevin would respond if you made a move, as you wanted to. The blurting out of the confession was as real as the turmoil of thoughts in your head and the actions of Kevin were exactly what I would have done in his place, so real. Well done, but more please. Rod

In fact, a cracking story....enjoyed it very much. Readable, interesting, erotic....and just the right length...thankyou.

Very well written, good buildup but not drawn out, nice climax. Hope you write more.

Thanks for sharing this very entertaining story. Short and complete!!. Maybe a REVISITED!!!!!! is in the works???

I love the way he took her with no words, completely taking control of her body like he knew it was always his. I have so many scenarios running through my head as to what happens with them. You definitely left me wanting more ;)

This story is so amazing and hot! Please write more; I think a sequel would be amazing!