All Comments on 'The Visit'

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bigbob2406bigbob2406almost 6 years ago

The worst I have ever read on here. Such sad pathetic crap.

PlanerguyPlanerguyalmost 6 years ago
Sick

Really? This is sick and stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Lost!

You lost it at the start!

Sharing your wife with someone doesn't mean the whole city can be rolling in for a fuck. That is just moronic!!!

Well... just as moronic as you are for thinking, it is great idea.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good quick read

A good cuckold and BDSM story, lots of potential for more chapters, so don't stop here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Haters gonna hate

i enjoyed it, but then again i am a cuckold that loves watching my Wife fuck black guys.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Too Messed Up

All these stories about whites being submissive to dominant black bulls are tiresome or boreing at best. If there are white females or couples that go for this crap, good luck making it thru life. I doubt if you have any self respect and probably don’t enjoy your partner or yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for writing. The story was overall quite enjoyable. I would note, if you want constructive criticism, that the characters seemed a bit stiff/robotic carefully following their scripted roles every moment. I realize it's part of the character of the story, but it almost felt like they were walking through the motions, ramrod straight backed, barking back their lines if flat voices. Anyway, thank you again. *5

P.S. Gotta love the bigots coming to the interracial section to bitch. Such horribly boring livings they must lead.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Not a submissive punk

But I have watched my wife fuck over 40 black cocks in our 22 years of marriage. Every size cock from 5.5" to a little over 10". Nothing more erotic than seeing her cum multiple times during a night by a BBC.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
So why stay married to a man you are roommates with?

It can't be for financial security since she can divorce him and take over half his shit. It can't be for love since there was absolutely ZERO love to be shown. So explain why she is still married to him?

I'm not judging their kink, I fail to see the reason to remain in an institution that has nothing to do with their relatinship. Unless the author has them married simply to humiliate them, then there is no logical reason to not get a divorce.

chrissy2chrissy2over 5 years ago
bbc

goles to show what happens when REAL MEN fuck

syn4321syn4321over 2 years ago

This is a hot story. Thank you!

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