All Comments on 'The Visitor'

by madala

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great!!!

Brilliant work, madala! Rather quick pace, but the twist at the end was an excellent work. I can imagine some angry readers if they are intent on a long pleasure session, but the story is still superb. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sublime

A work of art taking me to the highest expectation and then pouring cold water water on my vision of your beautiful unclothed, writhing self. Two or three or four cycles like this will result in a vast explosion that will be heard around the world.

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