All Comments on 'The Voice Pt. 01'

You have me hooked. At first I assumed your protagonist was a woman, but that finally got straightened out. The hottie at the desk across from you had a face as distinct as the day us long. Maybe a movie star; I don't know. I have done phone sex with an ex girlfriend 27 years ago, so I know two hours is possible. Ok, we only did it once like that, but it is seared into my brain. So now you have a problem that needs fixed in the unisex bathroom, but you don't want to miss Lynn's return call, if she does call back. Of course there is no question she will call back. Now I have to wait for you to post Pt. 02 !

But highly enjoyable.

Keepnfocused and we will keep reading.