All Comments on 'The Voyuer - Thandi's Tale'

Paul that was so hot! So descriptive....made me tingle, made me wet!

I've been waiting for days since you told me you had submitted it, you did not disappoint!

"Hooked on a dangerous addiction"....incredibly accurate!

Will there be more to this story? I would love to see where it may lead!

Thank you!

at least learn to spell the title of your story correctly. It's 'voyeur'. French. She's Canadian; you should know that.

You have strong written expression , well written