All Comments on 'The Waitress'

I do hope there is more to come

Mmm very sweet.

you really should continue this it's very good!

A very well written story! I hope this was only the first chapter of this story... Thank you!

Thank you for your lovely comments. I will be continuing this in the near future with a couple more stories. Nothing planned just yet as I have other stories coming but stay tuned :-)

Than for the lovely romantic story, as they seek out their yearnings and gently offer them to each other. A senstive tale, written with much sensitivity

You have a very gentle and sensitive writing style. I like it.

Mmm sexy.

Nice. Very nice. The dynamics of this is going to be interesting

This is not normally my genre. Yet I find myself going to it. Well done.

TBC

Loved your story-Well done and sexy

It was sometimes hard to follow, because I couldn't tell who "she" referred to at times. Probably using the protagonists names would have helped a lot. Still, great story, thanks for sharing it with us!

Hallo Shaima32!

Thank-You!.... This is a beautifully written, very romantic story, and I can hardly wait to read chapter-2,,, yes!

Even with my English this part is easy,,, 5-Stars and 5-Hot Orgasms, 😍

Gay Kat.

Your short works are such helter-skelter. They're arms and legs and words and breasts and phrases and pussies. And hint of forever.

How is it that I am only reading this now?