All Comments on 'The Wake Up Call'

Hi readers,

Please leave a comment - I'd love to know what you think about my first story effort...

M.

A good start with lots of possible avenues to follow if you wish to.

You have several days, don't waste it all on sex but instead let your relationship grow together. You are doing fine just keep the story going.

I thought your story had a great build to the climax. Keep up the good work. A couple of typos but nothing to serious :)