All Comments on 'The Walk'

by JavaJoy2321

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
What is next ?

A good start on their sexual soiree...What will Will do in Round #2?...As Rose blossoms, can we expect the pair to become a centerpiece of a continuing story?

JavaJoy2321JavaJoy2321almost 13 years agoAuthor
From the Author - Yes! More to cum!

Thanks for the interest in Rose and Will. Their story of young love will continue -- in The Date. It is currently being reviewed for approval. It shouldn't be long now!

One caveat though - look for The Date as written by Sledgenroses not JavaJoy2321. We switched accounts for a number of reasons that we won't go into here.

Thanks!

Sledgenroses

abc101abc101almost 13 years ago
great story

I enjoyed this. It was a nice and short segment that did not take up my time yet had enough emotion to keep me interested.

I read your response to the anonymous commenter and i will be sure to look for that second part of the story later.

Keep up the good work. I hope the couple discovers new exciting sexual activities to do together in upcoming chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Total fucking rubbish

Written by a wanker

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