All Comments on 'The Wallflower Ch. 08'

Is he slightly deranged and obsessed about Lily or is he just an evil maniacal person? Anyway, I really like this development in the story in which we get to know more about the Spirit, but I also want to know how many more chapters this story has left?

I want to shake Lily so bad. I understand her reasons but eventually she will need to stop being the victim and take control back from Brandon. That apology stunt he pulled should be the last straw. The more she let him get away with his bullying the more she looks guilty in her supposedly friend's eyes. That spirit need to torture Brandon.

I believe that Brandon has a thing for Vanessa, not in a good way either, but because she really likes Lily and won't believe his lies for very long he's intent on trying to tear them apart by terrorizing Lily. So far this hasn't worked, and unless Lily speaks up about what really happens Vanessa may walk right in to an abusive relationship.

Totally creeped me out (in a good way).I love how the story has progressed so far though I do wish that the Spirit would pay a visit to Brandon....

Been waiting forever for you to update ! Well worth it ! Can't wait for the next chapter hopefully it's comes out soon (:

O my goodness i love this story please don't stop writing i LOVE it LOVE it LOVE it

I'm glad this series is continuing.

This was a good meaty chapter that gave a lot of food for thought. Does Brandon have an obsession with lily or does he just want to break up the relationship between her and Vanessa for his own selfish reasons? Also is the spirit like big brother or is he more like a waiting in the wings type of dude ready to swoop in and show lily that she deserves someone who will go to great lengths for her

P.S. as a fellow student I feel your pain but this does not make up for the fact that you fell off lit for like five months with not even a half a page of something, a girl needs her fix lol I need what should have come out over the past months out..... still love you and the story

Please we want updates. Post chapter 9 10 11 and 100. I think brandon may have had feelings for lily since middleschool and just got desperate frustrated coz maybe he fantasies about him and lily being the prom king and queen. I also think hes just using vanessa to get close to her. For lily he was invisible no matter how popular he was until he gets involved with vanessa. For the spirit we want to know more about him. We also want more of puerto rico.

-maria

please post another chapter this story is so good but i wish it could get sooner posts of chapters. i cant wait for whats coming next!

what kind of relationship do the spirit and Lily have? I hope it comes more clear in the future chapters soon, and I hope there will be some more sexiness in the story soon. Thanks for the update, update soon Shanee

you updated yassssssss this was so good and im so tired of brandons fake ass. girl if he was real we woulda been fightin

Fuck Vanessa. She's not a real friend and she's dumb. I hope Lily tells her what's up with Brandon before he hurts her too.

THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I DON'T FEEL AS IF VANESSA IS HER REAL FRIEND CAUSE SHE ACTS AS IF SHE DOESN'T KNOW LILY AT ALL. WELL DEFINITELY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE , HOPE IT'S SOON;) KMP!

I good a guessing the twists and turns of stories, but this has kept me at the edge of my seat. I am so ready for a new chapter!