All Comments on 'The War of 2020 Pt. 09'

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Ellienora35Ellienora35over 4 years ago
The depo shot

Will the depo shot she took make her miscarry? She’s pregnant. This could get very interesting very quickly. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Way to go!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome!

I am SO happy part 9 is out!! I love this series and was getting kind of worried it was ending with part 8. Thanks so much for your continued work!

DeonadeeDeonadeeover 4 years ago
Yaaaay!!! They’re back!

Welcome back Morgan! I love your series. I have yet to read a published interracial book this intriguing and well written. This was hot. And you made me have a loud outburst at the end! This plot thickens. Hehehe!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Worth the wait

What a chapter! Plots upon plots, Mind games and adventure and hot hot scenes. This was excellent.

notusuallyshynotusuallyshyover 4 years ago
Gripped

Adventure, subterfuge, sadistic psychosis, mind games and Love even if it is a bit twisted. Great series, all the characters hold my interest, the storyline improves chapter upon chapter. And sexy, sex. love it all!

tati89tati89over 4 years ago
Fantastic as usual!

This chapter is fantastic as usual! I love the suspense and crazy cave man antics of Hunter and Joe! Lol!

I'm curious if Morgan will actually give birth to the baby..such suspense! I can see how it's hard for Morgan not to have feelings for Joe and Hunter since she's only human and these two are hot and care about her in their own wicked ways! Haha

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
grrrrr

I was so looking forward to her screwing them over and escaping... please please please don't let the enslavement win!!! magic dick stories are so disappointing in the end, I have hope that you will still allow her to break free both physically and mentally. using a baby to enslave someone is super evil, can't imagine that child's life turning out anything good in the end psychologically, I really hope you have a good idea of how to get her out of this predicament

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pregnant!

Girl yes! I love that she is pregnant! As obsessed as they already are, she’s about to have those two wrapped around her little fingers! Plus pregnant p$#$y is super wet and breasts are extremely sensitive. If she begins to seek them out for relief from her hormonal body, they’re going to be even more in love. Girl get’em! 😆 Her and Patty are about to tear that place down from the inside and loose themselves at the same time. I guess they’ll be the casualties of the War.

bandogirl09bandogirl09over 4 years ago
More!!!

I'm obsessed lol I have been checking every day for the newest chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
New year, new chapter please

Can't wait to read.

Namaste9Namaste9over 4 years ago
MORE!

I must have more. I love this story. Please post again soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please!

I love this! Please chapter 10!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I need more!

This is the first story I have not been able to put down! I read the whole thing in 2 days and now I need more! Can not wait to read chapter 10! Xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hurry up!

Please don’t leave us hanging! This was a great story and deserves continuation and a proper ending! Thanks for a great time.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 4 years ago
HEARTIEST CONGRATS ON WINNING THE.......

2019 BEST NON-CONSENT STORY AWARD !!!!!

bandogirl09bandogirl09about 4 years ago
Woot woot

Congrats on the win!!!!!

tati89tati89about 4 years ago
Please please continue the story!

It's now 2020 and racism is such a big issue in American. Without going toooo into politics, I woud love to see Morgan rioting

Pleasepleaseplease continue yout strory!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Looking forward to what’s next!

Really enjoying this story and read the whole thing in one day! Where are you planning to release the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please be Smyths child

I want her and Smyth together, guys who care about consent are hottest!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Another HisPet21

It's too bad, so many stories abandoned here.

I guess you get what you pay for ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep going

I check all the time for updates! Keep going, I know you will come back to this. It just got really interesting!

Auri22Auri22over 3 years ago

Wish you'd continue. Smyth is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

AsannaAsannaalmost 3 years ago

Where's the rest of it

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The story is unfinished. If authors are not going to finish the stories then don't write them. Because this story seems to be dead, I give this story line a failure, not because of the story but the unwillingness to complete the story.

MObryanMObryanover 2 years agoAuthor

Author here: Incase anyone wants to know why I haven't finished the story. Covid 19 happened and it's kinda fucked up that I'm being dragged for not writing more free content when i have said from the start that this is a HOBBY. If you want more than I would appreciate support and constructive feedback not bitching because you want more.

TaekuxTaekuxover 2 years ago

Great job on the story! Can't wait to see where it goes from here! Hope everything is well with you during COVID-19. Don't worry about the haters and bring us more of this wonderful story when you can :D

ZekeyveraZekeyveraover 2 years ago

I cant wait until you have the time to work on lore of the story. FUCK the haters and take your time. I love the story and cant wait to see what you come up with next. Wish you the best of luck during these trying times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This has been a great storyline…many thanks to the author for sharing. I found the context of a US civil war interesting and would have enjoyed seeing more of that aspect explored. But the main characters were awesome, each with some likeable aspects but also with significant flaws. And they were all larger than life which I enjoyed and would love to see more of how they develop, especially Smyth and Morgan. I would certainly enjoy reading more if this story is continued.

HateandspiceHateandspiceover 1 year ago

I usually never comment on stories. This one is not something I usually like, the racist narrative (from the characters not the author) is difficult to get past but the complexity of the characters, the humor the non-con makes me feel such mixed emotions that I got completely ADDICTED!

Now! I really hope the author is doing well and I completely understand that life (and a pandemic) happens and sometimes things that were fun not longer are enjoyable. I do hope this author returns and completes this story because it is a story that deserves to come to life but if they have decided to leave it I hope they update us so we can get closure!

Cus this was freaking torture 😅 also, can we comment about what a freaking fortune teller the author was with the virus in 2020?!??

SideofsausageSideofsausage5 months ago

The worst thing about this story is that it's not finished!!!!

😭😭😭😭

Babydevil93Babydevil934 months ago

After reading all the previous parts I finally want to comment. I really enjoy your writing, so natural and effortless while touching some seriously depraved kinks. While not liking all of them this still is one of the best written stories on here imo <3

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