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A red Martian needs semen to foretell the future in a steampunk universe...hmm...I like this. Looking forward to more.

BUT...and this is a distinction that ONLY MATTERS TO ME.

But this isn't steampunk. While there are coal burning steamships, this is actually based on the technology of the 20th century if HG Wells' War of the Worlds actually happened (with bits of Edgar Rice Burroughs' Barsoom series thrown in for...well, for the sexy red chicks, mostly.)

So, all the exoframes and heat rays and airships are based off technology used by Martians in WotW. Which I do suggest everyone read, it's still remarkably modern feeling despite being more than a century old!

But I thought Hitler ran a bunch of rapid weight loss facilities? What's the big deal?

A good start

already some character development

Looking forward to seeing the direction you take

djb

It may not be steampunk, but it’s a lot more “punk” than most of what people call steampunk.

.. for demolishing the germans 0:40... Adolph Hitler.

Would be great if human sperm can help women foretell the future

good idea to set your story in an after "war of the worlds" scenario, the hero having the opportunity to help out with his sperm :-) and now this big surprise involving Hitler - I'm looking forward to the next chapter!