All Comments on 'The Warlock Pt. 03'

"I mean, why didn't you tell me you had a palace." ~ Smooth.

Damn though. He got a great deal quick, scary quick. And I do so ever wonder what lovely goodies he'll find in the evidence locker.

i imagine a 2 dicked demon would have a weakness for a mace to the funbag

i'm wondering how the good guys are going to try and weasel the deal and how much his succubus is going to "thank daddy for the double dicked present he's bringing home to her". then there's the silver necklace that i'm betting is going to end up in the hands of his new apprentice necromancer... hmm oh what tangled webs to follow

At the part where it says

"Despite all the wizardly and holy power represented in the room it seemed that it was only Gwydion and I talking."

Yeah, "wizardly" is not actually a word. >.< Again I blame Harry Potter for people getting this all wrong. You should have said arcane powers for people that are a witch, warlock, and wizard as all their "magic powers" are classified under arcane. But still very different because a wizard's magic is based purely on science and warlocks get their powers from supernatural entities like demons. And for paladins and clerics says holy or divine powers works. But aside from that I didn't notice anything else wrong with it. The rest is nicely written, and interesting. I like how well you have developed this character and how this isn't just a story where a guy just wanted sexy and most of it is just him fucking. XD It's a nice balance of both story and sex. Well done. :)

Good read,

great continuation.

Thought I would have enjoyed something a bit more fierce when it came to the final battle, it was well crafted and written creating superb tension.

Keep it up!

This is shaping up to be a really great story...keep up the great work!

nice nice and fucking nice

no other words than a massive smile on my face and a huge 5 star from me

love the name of the warlock legend

JC

And a great one too. I have read many on this sight from all areas and yes this is good keep it up.

I noted in the statement to the fiancée of his old girlfriend, you used the wrong homonym.

Caused some confusion for a second or three until I figured out what you meant.

You should have used the contraction of you are (you're), as "your" is a possessive.

Other than that, it's a good story, and I hope to see more chapters!

Your made yourself the Merlin of Warlocks...nice. Enjoying the story. Hope I enjoy the rest of the chapters even more.

Interesting. Maybe another chapter.....

Perfect, pulpy warlock porn. It feels like Harry Dresden but not poor.

Not sure that I was following everything happening during the fight, but dam what a fight ;)