All Comments on 'The Warlock Pt. 05'

Thanks for the chapter, I am eagerly awaiting your next one.

JW

Don't worry about the length of the story as long as you finish it. And I hope your not projecting your subconscious, tapping Lilith

Thank you.

I'd prefer waiting a little longer for a larger post, but I'm good either way. What I want doesn't matter. It's your story. Write at your pace, good story so far, keep it coming when you can.

... we love what you write: short, long, or in between, any way, shape, or form. We will, occasionally, whimper & beg for more but that's just cause we're greedy & childish. c:

Nthusiastic

Thanks for sharing!

I can't think of why someone would stop reading a story that was continuing to be printed but was 'too short'? Worst case scenario, you wait a couple of chapters if you're a real rabid length fanatic, but with a story like this, you WILL keep reading. No worries, boss.

It's great to find a story that is not just focused on two or twenty something's (people, beasts, demons) doing nothing but humping each other senseless. So far nice storyline, dialog, witty reparte. Keep it up. Thanks.

You're doing a great job keeping the plot fresh and storytelling engaging. I can see a movie made based on this in future.

Kept reading without the sex because it was interesting. It keeps getting better. Minor grammatical errors an editor would help but no show stoppers

Imaginative, fun, witty, and just a great chapter.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for posting!!

I know the length is short, but I'd rather have short chapters more frequently than long chapters less frequently. Keep 'em coming!

One of those stories that keeps getting better and better.

Can you imagine Martin's ex when she bumps into Xandra and Chloe. How do you compete with a succubus? There has got to be some great dialogue there.

This is way better than those plays by Willie Shakespeare! IMHO

I like your balance of sex and story and even there wasn't much in this one I don't think that sex is always necessary in these books. Great work keep them coming.

Keep up the good work.

I also agree, If the flow is steady the chapters length can adapt to fit what is happening.

Ramjet

As long as the story doesn't suffer from it, the short chapters are fine to me. I care more that you don't leave us hanging on the story overall than that you give the chunks to us in a specific size.