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He stood up
"It is time. You have a busty redheaded nurse that wants to kick your ass waiting for you in a few minutes. How is this for coincidence? I lost my virginity to Xandra's great grandmother. Lillith was freshly fallen and totally depraved. God she was hot." He grinned as he started to get lost in his memories.
"If you want to talk or have any questions I am a lot closer than you think." he continued, "Just don't lose your mace." He gave me a wink and the room faded around me.
It became white again for a second. Then black. Then the pain really hit me.
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- COMMENTS
sviedabout 7 years agoAs long as the story doesn't suffer from it, the short chapters are fine to me. I care more that you don't leave us hanging on the story overall than that you give the chunks to us in a specific size.
Ramjet75about 7 years agoKeep up the good work.
I also agree, If the flow is steady the chapters length can adapt to fit what is happening.
Ramjet
Timmy8695almost 8 years agoI like your balance of sex and story and even there wasn't much in this one I don't think that sex is always necessary in these books. Great work keep them coming.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoThis is way better than those plays by Willie Shakespeare! IMHO
Anonymousabout 8 years agoCan you imagine Martin's ex when she bumps into Xandra and Chloe. How do you compete with a succubus? There has got to be some great dialogue there.
