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"It is time. You have a busty redheaded nurse that wants to kick your ass waiting for you in a few minutes. How is this for coincidence? I lost my virginity to Xandra's great grandmother. Lillith was freshly fallen and totally depraved. God she was hot." He grinned as he started to get lost in his memories.
"If you want to talk or have any questions I am a lot closer than you think." he continued, "Just don't lose your mace." He gave me a wink and the room faded around me.
It became white again for a second. Then black. Then the pain really hit me.
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As long as the story doesn't suffer from it, the short chapters are fine to me. I care more that you don't leave us hanging on the story overall than that you give the chunks to us in a specific size.
Keep up the good work.
I also agree, If the flow is steady the chapters length can adapt to fit what is happening.
Ramjet
I like your balance of sex and story and even there wasn't much in this one I don't think that sex is always necessary in these books. Great work keep them coming.
This is way better than those plays by Willie Shakespeare! IMHO
Can you imagine Martin's ex when she bumps into Xandra and Chloe. How do you compete with a succubus? There has got to be some great dialogue there.
I know the length is short, but I'd rather have short chapters more frequently than long chapters less frequently. Keep 'em coming!
Imaginative, fun, witty, and just a great chapter.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for posting!!
Kept reading without the sex because it was interesting. It keeps getting better. Minor grammatical errors an editor would help but no show stoppers
You're doing a great job keeping the plot fresh and storytelling engaging. I can see a movie made based on this in future.