by TooCleverByHalf
This deserves at least 10 stars. Looking forward to the next chapter.
This was excellent! I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Love this story!
I've loved the entire series, but this one was a step up. The mind game about how they can ignore their own rules was brilliant. Making them face their issues with each other made it more than just hot sex. And it was still hot sex too. Well done. Looking forward to the next part. Please don't leave us hanging by never finishing the story.
I love how there is a wonderful plot with many twist and turns and an interesting back story about the national park that I am eager to find out what happens.
The quality of your story has definately made me reevaluate how I rate the other stories I have read and will read in the future.
Thank you for your dedication and time bring worth this story.
This series has been great and I didn't think it could get any hotter. However, this chapter exceeded my expectations, by far! The only down side is we now have to wait for the next chapter. :)
TooCleverByHalf you are awesome, Great story can't wait for next chapter
about the rest of you but I'm a sweatin'!
hot hotties heatedly hopping hooters, no wonder the snow is finally melting.
I love this story line. So far this chapter is the hottest. Can I give it 2 fives, cause its a 10 for sure!