All Comments on 'The Warped & Wicked Gym Coach Ch. 07'

This story started amazingly but just got worse. The start of the story that wraps up to the end was ok.

Hey, I've seen loads of negative comments about where your story went but I thought it was great, especially the epilogue.

Keep up the good work!

I’ve refrained from commenting until the end, but thanks for the kind words! I had fun writing this, and it’s been gratifying to see people react to it, positively and negatively. You can’t please them all; and if you could, who would want to?

Thanks to everyone who made it this far! I hope to write something again in the near future.

Can't follow the criticism at all. I loved the story and I would love to see how the "next generation" continues to refine the process with Helina!

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Great Story! Curves Thrown Every Time I Thought I Knew What Was Coming! Amazing Writing! One Of The Best Ever! Thanks!

Was a bit too crazy and sudden for my tastes. Nothing bad about it per se but... just not the ending I was hoping for.

It was twisted, perverted, degrading to young men, humiliating, embarrassing, devious, sexually explicit and shaming. In fact this story contained everything to make it a success. There are those, (I see from the comments) that would like to have seen the story honed to their own particular tastes - but I think you have managed to include nearly everything into this one. Skilfully executed and delightfully surprising. It is definitely a five-star piece. Oh, I forgot to say... a penetrative and consummate read of the warped and wicked kind. Supernacular!

What a story. Superb!

Richly intelligent, wisely imaginative, and deeply thoughtful.

Particular appreciation for the high level of patience and discipline in the crafting.

A true 5-stars on all accounts.

Huge thank you.

Please continue