All Comments on 'The Warrior Ch. 03'

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Anonymousover 18 years ago

FINALLY!

geez, i was afraid this would never get updated. I am really glad it did cause that was a great chapter!!! Good work.

PLEASE don't take so long next time to update!

Anonymousover 18 years ago

I'm loving this - story-telling at its best.

Lukas

Anonymousover 18 years ago

More please!

Can't wait for the next chapter. I love the story so far.

Anonymousover 18 years ago

more please

this is such a great chapter. I really hope that the next one will be posted soon.

Anonymousover 18 years ago

I love this..

Please update soon! T__T You're killing me.

sweet_kitten about 18 years ago

fab

You havent slipped once and the story is still just as strong as the first chapter a captivating read!

Anonymousover 12 years ago

Dry opinion

Good, plenty of sex, but slow in storyline.

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Well! It's been 6 years, but in the midst of procrastinating on working on the manuscript for an actual novel (gasp!), I started looking over some of my old work and found the partially-finished stories I'd put up here. Cue the resulting guilt and urge to get the ball rolling ...

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