All Comments on 'The Warrior'

There has to be MORE!!!

Lukas

it was a very good start. don't leave us haning. i hope the next one is coming soon.

WOW!!! Very Nice! Don't make us wait too long for the next Chapter!!!

Waiting for the next few Chapters. Well written and left me wanting more. Please continue to submit your works. Thank you.

Keep up the good work. I like sword and sorcery type erotic fiction, and there is so little of it around

drawandstrike

The story was superbly written and your characters are immediately strong I've already moved on to the next chapter and that was just as wonderful. If you havent already you really should get your works published because you are a very talented writer!

Where bis the rest of the story? You left the story hanging

Simple, yet inspiring. Loved it.

A beautiful story, well written and compelling.

But ...

After all the setup in the introduction, does it need to end after the sex? What happened next? Did the warrior and his companions save the village with great glory, and then all return to honor the Priestess for her contribution? Orgasm does not stop the world from happening, after all ...

Maybe there is a chapter two? I would love to read it.