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Leiko sang out in pleasure as the Oni tugged on her nipples and clit. She came for the fourth time as she turned her head to kiss the Oni. The Oni shoved his tongue down her throat while his hand was still clamped around her neck. Leiko's eyes fluttered as she passed out from lack of air. The Oni punched her in the gut snapping her back to life. The Oni brought up a second hand and clasped down on her neck. He continued to strangle her unconscious and then beat her back awake.
The crowd shouted for more as the hovering cameras pasted the images on the large screens all over the arena. Sumiko's and Leiko's screams echoed throughout the entire arena as they were brutally fucked with no remorse. Suzume couldn't let out sounds of protest do to the cocks forced in her mouth ever second. Cum was leaking out of every one of her holes and was only going to be filled with more. One camera zoomed in on Suzumebachi's back; to her tattoo of the dragon. Osamu smiled at how faded the seal had become in such a short time. He would be able to make his move soon.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoOn the one hand, this story (so far) does an excellent job of imitating the kind of humiliation and rape hentai that it is clearly inspired by, and in that vein the plot, excuse though it may be, is far better than it needs to be, the writing is good, the scenes reasonably imaginative, and the heroines human enough to relate to. Its main flaw is the patented Smug Asshole Hentai Villain™ model whose neigh-omnipotence is always somewhat annoying, but even here you manage to take some of the edge off by showing him being genuinely inconvenienced and flummoxed by the main heroine's resistance in an earlier chapter.
In short, I don't want to imply that this is not a story that largely succeeds at what it sets out to do, and does so with obvious energy and passion.
However, that kind of humiliation and rape hentai just isn't my thing. Even when it is well-written enough to be arousing in discrete units, as this is, it ultimately leaves me feeling sick and depressed. Especially when any possibility of a happy ending has been pretty ruthlessly stamped out for everyone involved.
I'm writing this post because this story deserves some commentary that I don't see it getting, but it's just not my shindig. If it weren't for the utter drought of ninja stories on this site, I'm sorry to say that I probably wouldn't have bothered giving this a second glance, simply because it lies so far outside my strike zone.
Good luck anyway.
