All Comments on 'The Watcher'

by VooDooPrincess

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jalapamajalapamaalmost 14 years ago
Excellent first story!

Makes one wish he lived in the building across from yours . . .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Bravo

Well done...strong, believable characters, real life situation, and good hot sex! Thanks.

peebudypeebudyalmost 14 years ago
wind that watch!

OMFG...this story is sooo well written! the descriptions and anticipation had my cock rock hard all the way thru. I was psyched to see a page 2 but the disappointed only to find a couple more paragrahs. you have to write more!

stringer60stringer60almost 14 years ago
Wonderful!

What a great story - beautifully paced and with a great eye to the "reality" of it all the way through. I was so there with you - will in my nasty little mind at least LOL Please keep writing whatever comes into your gorgeous and sexy mind, I for one will eat it (and you) all up :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Sexy and Erotic

Loved it. I wish there was more to it too

I hope you write more stories as this was very well written and so exciting

And I hope you add a nice sexy photo of yourself to your profile too :)

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