All Comments on 'The Water Nymph Ch. 02'

I love everything about this story, the theme is great, it's well written, and has cool characters. My only complaint if you can call it that, is that the chapters aren't long enough. Keep up the great work!! This is the best story I've read on Lit in a while.

Very hot!

Ah, that feeling when you discover a quality story. I pine for more.

Looking forward to more!